Welcome to the ArtFeed Faye! Good job on these berries! The rendering is nice as are the colors! My one comment would be consistency. A couple of the red berries could use more tonal range to enhance their form and a number are missing a highlight. Same goes for the blue berries. Pay attention to the placement of the highlights as some are not where I would expect them to be. You are off to a good start!
Thank you so much Doug! I’m going to try the berries again as they emerge in the landscape, the next time around with a sharper light source to achieve an accurate and defined highlight.
Welcome to the ArtFeed Faye! Good job on these berries! The rendering is nice as are the colors! My one comment would be consistency. A couple of the red berries could use more tonal range to enhance their form and a number are missing a highlight. Same goes for the blue berries. Pay attention to the placement of the highlights as some are not where I would expect them to be. You are off to a good start!
Thank you so much Doug! I’m going to try the berries again as they emerge in the landscape, the next time around with a sharper light source to achieve an accurate and defined highlight.