Hi Fiona- it is nice to see the Holly in color and graphite! Some of things I mentioned on the color version still apply here. r.e. the veins, whiter highlights and the cast shadows. I would go back in and add more dark toning on the berries to emphasize their form and differentiate them. They are too much the same tone. Nice job!
Hi Fiona- it is nice to see the Holly in color and graphite! Some of things I mentioned on the color version still apply here. r.e. the veins, whiter highlights and the cast shadows. I would go back in and add more dark toning on the berries to emphasize their form and differentiate them. They are too much the same tone. Nice job!