You have been busy Fanny! The cylinder on the right is the most successful. The highlight could shift to the right a little on all of the cylinders, but it looks good on the branches. On that cylinder on the right the toning to the right of the highlight gets dark pretty quick. I would lighten the area to the right of the highlight and work on having a range of darkening tones as it moves right. The toning on the branches looks very good!
Thank you Doug for your kind comment! I could see some of the toning issues but didn’t realize those highlights were not in the right place. I really appreciate getting your experienced advice.
You have been busy Fanny! The cylinder on the right is the most successful. The highlight could shift to the right a little on all of the cylinders, but it looks good on the branches. On that cylinder on the right the toning to the right of the highlight gets dark pretty quick. I would lighten the area to the right of the highlight and work on having a range of darkening tones as it moves right. The toning on the branches looks very good!
Thank you Doug for your kind comment! I could see some of the toning issues but didn’t realize those highlights were not in the right place. I really appreciate getting your experienced advice.