Hi Fanny, In deed, you have picked a challenging subject! This is looking good! I agree with Doug’s comments and see you have heeded him and made great improvements. I especially like the way the bulbish part of the flower has more shape and texture now. I’d like to see more a sense of light on form with the petals. It is challenging because they are so thin and feathery, but I still want to see a highlight and shadow. Maybe darken the petals on the far right and left as they go back in space and further from the light.
Thank you Katy, I’m going to try your suggestion! I wish I had used watercolor paper to achieve a better definition on the petals despite their thinness.
Hi Fanny, In deed, you have picked a challenging subject! This is looking good! I agree with Doug’s comments and see you have heeded him and made great improvements. I especially like the way the bulbish part of the flower has more shape and texture now. I’d like to see more a sense of light on form with the petals. It is challenging because they are so thin and feathery, but I still want to see a highlight and shadow. Maybe darken the petals on the far right and left as they go back in space and further from the light.
Thank you Katy, I’m going to try your suggestion! I wish I had used watercolor paper to achieve a better definition on the petals despite their thinness.