Hi Ginny- your cylinder is coming along. The transitions are much smoother! I think you could still lighten both sides of the highlight a little more. Look at the right side again. The toning is not consistent so there is lighter section just before you reach the middle (from the top). The branch is looking good. Be aware of the highlight. There are spots where you have the highlight vertically straight, but the branch is curving. The highlight should curve with the branch.
16 February 2020
Ginny, nice work! I think the highlight on your branch could scoot over to the left a little more. It is reading like it’s in the center of the branch. (I know there is not much horizontal room there, but even just a little left of center will do.) 🙂 The texture on the branch is really nice! I like how sometimes it breaks up the light light a little bit in places. This large cylinder has a nice feel to it. More smooth than before. That highlight, too, could move a little more to the left, just to exaggerate the three-dimensional illusion.
Hi Ginny- your cylinder is coming along. The transitions are much smoother! I think you could still lighten both sides of the highlight a little more. Look at the right side again. The toning is not consistent so there is lighter section just before you reach the middle (from the top). The branch is looking good. Be aware of the highlight. There are spots where you have the highlight vertically straight, but the branch is curving. The highlight should curve with the branch.
Ginny, nice work! I think the highlight on your branch could scoot over to the left a little more. It is reading like it’s in the center of the branch. (I know there is not much horizontal room there, but even just a little left of center will do.) 🙂 The texture on the branch is really nice! I like how sometimes it breaks up the light light a little bit in places. This large cylinder has a nice feel to it. More smooth than before. That highlight, too, could move a little more to the left, just to exaggerate the three-dimensional illusion.