Hi Ginny- Your hyacinth bulb is looking good and I love the roots. There are a couple of areas I would revisit. I think you need more mid-range toning transitioning from the dark toning on the right side. Also the highlight on the stem is too far to the right. Refer back to your recent cylinder drawing to see where the highlight should be. Nice job!
07 March 2020
Ginny, good job keeping track of these roots as they overlap. I especially like the ones in the very back that are curving to the right. I think in the future, try to achieve more variation in tone, so that some roots feel lighter than others. That way, you’ll get a real feeling of depth and movement, Good job!
Hi Ginny- Your hyacinth bulb is looking good and I love the roots. There are a couple of areas I would revisit. I think you need more mid-range toning transitioning from the dark toning on the right side. Also the highlight on the stem is too far to the right. Refer back to your recent cylinder drawing to see where the highlight should be. Nice job!
Ginny, good job keeping track of these roots as they overlap. I especially like the ones in the very back that are curving to the right. I think in the future, try to achieve more variation in tone, so that some roots feel lighter than others. That way, you’ll get a real feeling of depth and movement, Good job!