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I know when something’s feeling off compliments can feel wrong, but still, Wow! The shapes and curls and overlaps of the petals and leaves are really lovely. I also like the overall composition.

I have a few ideas (to be taken with a grain of salt–I’m not as far along as you skill wise!). What about adding some blues/purples to the deepest shadows on the petals? Maybe even just the second, lower set of petals farther from the stamen? My one other thought is that maybe right now the one darker leaf is a little distracting. My eye keeps going to it, away from the flower. This might resolve on its own once the other leaves are darker.