Hi Sara! Your radish is beautifully rendered! It has a wonderful soft quality to it, which I really like and I am having a conflict with myself as to if I suggest you to take it further. For arguments sake, you could add more shadow toning along the right side to emphasize the form. I would also lift some color to make a more distinct highlight, which will also emphasize the radish’s form. Even though the tap root is very narrow, a limited range of tones on it will convey that it is an elongated cylinder.
Thank you for your feedback! I went back and tried changing it, and it does look better. Also, I belated realized that it’s a beet, not a radish, so I changed the title, but wanted other people to know that your comment made sense at the time!
Hi Sara! Your radish is beautifully rendered! It has a wonderful soft quality to it, which I really like and I am having a conflict with myself as to if I suggest you to take it further. For arguments sake, you could add more shadow toning along the right side to emphasize the form. I would also lift some color to make a more distinct highlight, which will also emphasize the radish’s form. Even though the tap root is very narrow, a limited range of tones on it will convey that it is an elongated cylinder.
Thank you for your feedback! I went back and tried changing it, and it does look better. Also, I belated realized that it’s a beet, not a radish, so I changed the title, but wanted other people to know that your comment made sense at the time!