Hendrika. this onion has a lovely softness to it. Very nice saturation in the dark red tones, and the subtle cross-contour lines show us the texture of the skin very well. My only suggestion would be to adjust your highlight so it is either on one side or the other, rather than stretching across the entire form. Right now, it looks more like a “band” of light across the whole onion; I think it would look more three-dimensional if the highlight was just in the upper right or left corner, depending on where your light source is coming from. Great work!
Hendrika. this onion has a lovely softness to it. Very nice saturation in the dark red tones, and the subtle cross-contour lines show us the texture of the skin very well. My only suggestion would be to adjust your highlight so it is either on one side or the other, rather than stretching across the entire form. Right now, it looks more like a “band” of light across the whole onion; I think it would look more three-dimensional if the highlight was just in the upper right or left corner, depending on where your light source is coming from. Great work!