Hi Hayden- this is a pleasing grouping and it is well done! I would tweak a couple of areas. It seems like the highlight on the tan pear on the left is caused by light coming from a different direction than the other two pears. That highlight should shift over more to the left. The lower section of highlight on the red pear is good, but the pointy section coming off it at the top seems too strong and I would tone it down with some color. With the cast shadows I would extend the dark toning further up the right sides of the pears. The shadows then fade out as they move away from the subject rather than being a uniform tone. I would add more dark toning in the “v” areas where the pears meet. Nice job!
Hi Hayden- this is a pleasing grouping and it is well done! I would tweak a couple of areas. It seems like the highlight on the tan pear on the left is caused by light coming from a different direction than the other two pears. That highlight should shift over more to the left. The lower section of highlight on the red pear is good, but the pointy section coming off it at the top seems too strong and I would tone it down with some color. With the cast shadows I would extend the dark toning further up the right sides of the pears. The shadows then fade out as they move away from the subject rather than being a uniform tone. I would add more dark toning in the “v” areas where the pears meet. Nice job!