Ishbel, this is a great start. I agree that you could work a little bit more on ellipses and choosing a view in perspective. That whole orange in the bottom right looks slightly elongated, or like we’re looking at it from above? Practice some more cut fruits, and you’ll get those ellipes looking good, I’m sure. 🙂 This is a really fun page. Love the variety of citrus!
Ishbel, this is a great start. I agree that you could work a little bit more on ellipses and choosing a view in perspective. That whole orange in the bottom right looks slightly elongated, or like we’re looking at it from above? Practice some more cut fruits, and you’ll get those ellipes looking good, I’m sure. 🙂 This is a really fun page. Love the variety of citrus!