That looks better all ready Ishbel and I agree that it could use a bit more. The addition of the cut section plus the individual pieces is really great! It is a very unique view and I love how you showed the knife cuts! I think you could commit more to the cast shadows. Beautiful!
07 March 2020
Nice, Ishbel! Love the addition of the cut pieces! I wonder if it wouldn’t be a bad idea to add some juice spilling out of the cut pieces? Just so we get a more juicy feel, rather than a dry look to the cut pieces? I don’t know… just a thought…. 🙂
Thanks for your feedback Doug. I did darken the right side a bit but see it could be a bit more.
That looks better all ready Ishbel and I agree that it could use a bit more. The addition of the cut section plus the individual pieces is really great! It is a very unique view and I love how you showed the knife cuts! I think you could commit more to the cast shadows. Beautiful!
Nice, Ishbel! Love the addition of the cut pieces! I wonder if it wouldn’t be a bad idea to add some juice spilling out of the cut pieces? Just so we get a more juicy feel, rather than a dry look to the cut pieces? I don’t know… just a thought…. 🙂
Hi Vern, yes it is very hard to get the wet, juicy look in fruit…maybe some juice would work. I need to practice my water drops 😁