Hi Ishbel, What a sweet drawing. And drawing anything white can be a challenge. Good job! My one comment would be to add some more brilliant whites to the highlight areas. It may be the photo, but for some reason the berries are looking a bit blue. Also I’d like to see a touch more darks in the leaves. I think that would set those white berries off nicely.
08 October 2021
I love the density of these clusters, Ishbel. You showed that really well here. I wonder if you could offset some of the “blue” feeling with some Cream or Ivory in the shadow areas? Or would it even show? Tough to create shiny white highlights on white berries! (You know I want to know: What do they look like on the inside?!!?) 😉
Hi Ishbel! Lovely berries, especially the way you placed them on the page. Great subject for Kraft paper too!
Hi Ishbel, What a sweet drawing. And drawing anything white can be a challenge. Good job! My one comment would be to add some more brilliant whites to the highlight areas. It may be the photo, but for some reason the berries are looking a bit blue. Also I’d like to see a touch more darks in the leaves. I think that would set those white berries off nicely.
I love the density of these clusters, Ishbel. You showed that really well here. I wonder if you could offset some of the “blue” feeling with some Cream or Ivory in the shadow areas? Or would it even show? Tough to create shiny white highlights on white berries! (You know I want to know: What do they look like on the inside?!!?) 😉