Beautiful, Jennie! This apple has a really nice softness to it that I love. You did a great job applying the pattern along the cross contour of the apple. The one thing I would recommend here is to adjust that cast shadow a little bit. I’d prefer to see this apple as if it were standing up on its small end, with a smaller shadow coming mostly from the bottom right, rather than extending so far up the right side. With this shadow, it feels more like the apple is somehow resting on its back, but we also see down into the stem.. it’s a little confusing. But it wouldn’t be hard to adjust that a little bit, and I think it would make a difference. 🙂 Nice job!
Beautiful, Jennie! This apple has a really nice softness to it that I love. You did a great job applying the pattern along the cross contour of the apple. The one thing I would recommend here is to adjust that cast shadow a little bit. I’d prefer to see this apple as if it were standing up on its small end, with a smaller shadow coming mostly from the bottom right, rather than extending so far up the right side. With this shadow, it feels more like the apple is somehow resting on its back, but we also see down into the stem.. it’s a little confusing. But it wouldn’t be hard to adjust that a little bit, and I think it would make a difference. 🙂 Nice job!