Looking good Jennie, I can feel the onion quality of this form. I like you contour lines. Make sure you give me a good highlight. And I think you can sharpen your dark pencil and give me a clean line on the right side of the bulb, and clean lines on some of the papery pieces at the bottom. Also I think you can still darken on the right to make me feel the rounding of the bulb. Draw on!
Looking good Jennie, I can feel the onion quality of this form. I like you contour lines. Make sure you give me a good highlight. And I think you can sharpen your dark pencil and give me a clean line on the right side of the bulb, and clean lines on some of the papery pieces at the bottom. Also I think you can still darken on the right to make me feel the rounding of the bulb. Draw on!