Hi James- you really captured the whitish film that grapes can have. There is one grape with a strong highlight and there are more that grapes that don’t have the film and I would punch up the highlight. I would add more tone to the upper leaf on the right side. It seems like the grapes would be casting a stronger shadow on the leaf. The orientation is throwing me. I expect the grapes to be hanging down. Nice job!
James, very nice drawing. I would add one thing to Doug’s suggestions. You could narrow up and tone down the veins on the leaves. This is a beautiful drawing, and a few tweeks will bring it to the next level.
Hi James- you really captured the whitish film that grapes can have. There is one grape with a strong highlight and there are more that grapes that don’t have the film and I would punch up the highlight. I would add more tone to the upper leaf on the right side. It seems like the grapes would be casting a stronger shadow on the leaf. The orientation is throwing me. I expect the grapes to be hanging down. Nice job!
James, very nice drawing. I would add one thing to Doug’s suggestions. You could narrow up and tone down the veins on the leaves. This is a beautiful drawing, and a few tweeks will bring it to the next level.