Nice job Jane! The onion has really nice form! I would look at the highlight again. Onion skin highlights are more linear than round as you have shown, but I think it could be a little brighter and I would expect to see more highlight than what you have shown. I am confused by the area on the top left. It is the same color and texture as the rest of the onion, but yet it is different. That area needs some clarification.
Thanks so much, Doug! I really struggled with that stem. It was the exact same color as the rest of the onion (before I ate it), just a different texture. I added some more dark shading after posting and it looks a bit better but I need lots more practice. Thanks again.
Nice job Jane! The onion has really nice form! I would look at the highlight again. Onion skin highlights are more linear than round as you have shown, but I think it could be a little brighter and I would expect to see more highlight than what you have shown. I am confused by the area on the top left. It is the same color and texture as the rest of the onion, but yet it is different. That area needs some clarification.
Thanks so much, Doug! I really struggled with that stem. It was the exact same color as the rest of the onion (before I ate it), just a different texture. I added some more dark shading after posting and it looks a bit better but I need lots more practice. Thanks again.