Hi Jill, As always your details are so carefully, beautifully rendered. Good job. I think with this drawing you need to think more about the spherical shape of the strawberry. This strawberry is looking a bit flat. Bring more darks to the core shadow and around the edges. Also remember the highlights will go darker as the whole of the object goes darker. For example, the seeds in the shadow side will be much darker than the ones in the highlight area.
Here is a drawing of strawberries I did a while ago. They don’t have the beautiful attention to detail that you achieve, but I think you can see how the seeds go darker in the dark areas.
Hi Jill, I agree with Katy’s comments and also think you could brighter your reds in the mid tone areas so your strawberry has more vibrant color, but it is off to a great start!
Wow Jill, this is so very beautiful!
Hi Jill, As always your details are so carefully, beautifully rendered. Good job. I think with this drawing you need to think more about the spherical shape of the strawberry. This strawberry is looking a bit flat. Bring more darks to the core shadow and around the edges. Also remember the highlights will go darker as the whole of the object goes darker. For example, the seeds in the shadow side will be much darker than the ones in the highlight area.
Here is a drawing of strawberries I did a while ago. They don’t have the beautiful attention to detail that you achieve, but I think you can see how the seeds go darker in the dark areas.
Hi Jill, I agree with Katy’s comments and also think you could brighter your reds in the mid tone areas so your strawberry has more vibrant color, but it is off to a great start!