Hey Jill, You and your beautiful detail! I can feel that texture. I’m a big fan of your work! However, in general I think you need to concentrate a bit more on conveying the shape as a whole. As with the strawberry, this is a bit flat. Could be a stylistic choice, But my aesthetic would want a rounder feel. All your highlights are similar in value. I’d darken the right side overall, highlights included.
Hey Jill, You and your beautiful detail! I can feel that texture. I’m a big fan of your work! However, in general I think you need to concentrate a bit more on conveying the shape as a whole. As with the strawberry, this is a bit flat. Could be a stylistic choice, But my aesthetic would want a rounder feel. All your highlights are similar in value. I’d darken the right side overall, highlights included.