Hi Jody, So beautiful! I love the rich colors. You draw like I do, with a bit of heavy hand. I’m not one for the paper showing through. That front yellow leaf is quite nice. The veining is perfect and I like the coloration and texture. However, you need to work on the shadow it casts on the other leaf. It looks like you have 2 light sources. Shadows on both sides. I’d erase out the one on the left side. Or darken the brown leaf to match the value of the shadow and add a darker shadow on the right. The texture on the fruit on the ground is also nicely done. And that lettering!
Beautiful, Jody. I love your drawings so much. In your lettering – I’d give a bit ore space next time in between your letters so that our eye can move about and through he words easier and not get bunched up. I love the style of lettering. Nicely done. Also, I like how the stem fades out at the top – that supports me leading with my eye to the focal point – really great composition.
Hi Jody, So beautiful! I love the rich colors. You draw like I do, with a bit of heavy hand. I’m not one for the paper showing through. That front yellow leaf is quite nice. The veining is perfect and I like the coloration and texture. However, you need to work on the shadow it casts on the other leaf. It looks like you have 2 light sources. Shadows on both sides. I’d erase out the one on the left side. Or darken the brown leaf to match the value of the shadow and add a darker shadow on the right. The texture on the fruit on the ground is also nicely done. And that lettering!
@katylyness thank you for your feedback!
Beautiful, Jody. I love your drawings so much. In your lettering – I’d give a bit ore space next time in between your letters so that our eye can move about and through he words easier and not get bunched up. I love the style of lettering. Nicely done. Also, I like how the stem fades out at the top – that supports me leading with my eye to the focal point – really great composition.
@sam-mcwilliams Thanks Sam! Luckily I did the lettering in pencil in case I changed my mind!