Hi Karen- nice job on this leaf! Good rich mix of greens! Some veins are minimal, but I would look at your leaf again to see if the veins are accurate. Usually the main vein starts wider at the base and tapers as it goes up the leaf and the secondary veins often break up before reaching the edge of the page. I would lighten and smooth out the toning on the cast shadow.
Hi Karen- nice job on this leaf! Good rich mix of greens! Some veins are minimal, but I would look at your leaf again to see if the veins are accurate. Usually the main vein starts wider at the base and tapers as it goes up the leaf and the secondary veins often break up before reaching the edge of the page. I would lighten and smooth out the toning on the cast shadow.
Thanks Doug