Hi Karen, nice rich color on the flower! And good job on the drawing of a complicated subject. I think what this needs is more of a sense of the light source. I think this will help with defining the complex arrangement of the petals. Also there is a white space in the stamen cluster. I think you would see some of the petal color come through or more likely the pistil color.
Thanks Katy. I went back to your earlier comments and the photo. There really was a white space in the stamen cluster. But I see from the photo that I could clarify the light source and will give it. try.
Hi Katy. I went back to the photo and there really is a white space in the stamen cluster. I can see however that I could clarify the light source. I am going to give it a try….
Hi Karen, nice rich color on the flower! And good job on the drawing of a complicated subject. I think what this needs is more of a sense of the light source. I think this will help with defining the complex arrangement of the petals. Also there is a white space in the stamen cluster. I think you would see some of the petal color come through or more likely the pistil color.
Thanks Katy. I went back to your earlier comments and the photo. There really was a white space in the stamen cluster. But I see from the photo that I could clarify the light source and will give it. try.
Hi Katy. I went back to the photo and there really is a white space in the stamen cluster. I can see however that I could clarify the light source. I am going to give it a try….