Hi Karen- beautiful colors! At the top where we see a glimpse of the front of the flower folding over and casting a shadow I can start to see some form, but I am missing highlights and a range of tones on the rest of the flower and stem. It is so easy to get excited about and get caught up in the colors and details and we get away from establishing and maintaining the highlights and tonal range which are vital for the form and realism. This is a good start and taking my suggestions into consideration would bring it clarity.
Hi Karen- beautiful colors! At the top where we see a glimpse of the front of the flower folding over and casting a shadow I can start to see some form, but I am missing highlights and a range of tones on the rest of the flower and stem. It is so easy to get excited about and get caught up in the colors and details and we get away from establishing and maintaining the highlights and tonal range which are vital for the form and realism. This is a good start and taking my suggestions into consideration would bring it clarity.
you nailed it. Thanks