The sliced pear is really beautiful! It has that style you have that I love. However somehow you seem to have lost the shape and coloration of the pear on the left. It is mostly working until you get to what I think is the cast shadow of the other pear. You still need to indicate the shapes in the shadow. And the color suggests the pear is maybe a bit too ripe. I would suggest working on toning spheres. I know you can do it. I saw your mushrooms!
That cut pear is a delight! Yes, we have to remember to work on communicating the form and volume before we get all excited about the descriptive colours and details.
The sliced pear is really beautiful! It has that style you have that I love. However somehow you seem to have lost the shape and coloration of the pear on the left. It is mostly working until you get to what I think is the cast shadow of the other pear. You still need to indicate the shapes in the shadow. And the color suggests the pear is maybe a bit too ripe. I would suggest working on toning spheres. I know you can do it. I saw your mushrooms!
I definately am working on toning, my number one priority. And excellent point about the shape of the pear.
That cut pear is a delight! Yes, we have to remember to work on communicating the form and volume before we get all excited about the descriptive colours and details.