Hi Katherine- the cut view is beautiful! I think the fruit and the leaves could use more saturation. I would also add more toning to the fruit to enhance their form. It looks like the peaches have fuzz on them, which is hard to illustrate. I think it will especially help to saturate the leaves because right now both leaves and fruit look too muted. You are off to a good start!
Hi Katherine- the cut view is beautiful! I think the fruit and the leaves could use more saturation. I would also add more toning to the fruit to enhance their form. It looks like the peaches have fuzz on them, which is hard to illustrate. I think it will especially help to saturate the leaves because right now both leaves and fruit look too muted. You are off to a good start!