Hi Koshin- your tomato has a stried pattern on the skin that to me looks more like an apple skin. I would saturate the finish more to even out the skin color. The red violet pencil is a good one to use for the darker tones, which you don’t want to lose. With the cast shadow, I would angle it back more, have it go up the side a little more and also have it fade out more. You are off to a good start!
Hi Koshin, Nice rich colors! I agree with Doug about the patterns on the skin. And think red violet a good choice to add darker tone to the shadow area. Try not to create obvious pencil lines. Or if you do, try to make them follow the contours of the tomato. I’d also work on the shadow around the stem. Darker and more defined. It seems a bit splotchy. Love the highlight!
Hi Koshin- your tomato has a stried pattern on the skin that to me looks more like an apple skin. I would saturate the finish more to even out the skin color. The red violet pencil is a good one to use for the darker tones, which you don’t want to lose. With the cast shadow, I would angle it back more, have it go up the side a little more and also have it fade out more. You are off to a good start!
Hi Koshin, Nice rich colors! I agree with Doug about the patterns on the skin. And think red violet a good choice to add darker tone to the shadow area. Try not to create obvious pencil lines. Or if you do, try to make them follow the contours of the tomato. I’d also work on the shadow around the stem. Darker and more defined. It seems a bit splotchy. Love the highlight!
Thank you for your comment. 🙂 Very helpful.