Hello Kiwi. I think your cross-section perhaps can use some variation in lighting from one side to the next. Nice glow on the skin. 🙂 And the whole fruit I think needs its highlight.
11 February 2021
Very nice drawing, Koshin! You really captured the ellipse and angle of the cut section very well! Re; the highlight on the whole fruit, you could consider giving that highlight a little texture, to show the “hairy” quality of the skin? You could also add some hairy edges to the profile of the fruit if you wanted to show that texture more. Beautiful work!!!
Hello Kiwi. I think your cross-section perhaps can use some variation in lighting from one side to the next. Nice glow on the skin. 🙂 And the whole fruit I think needs its highlight.
Very nice drawing, Koshin! You really captured the ellipse and angle of the cut section very well! Re; the highlight on the whole fruit, you could consider giving that highlight a little texture, to show the “hairy” quality of the skin? You could also add some hairy edges to the profile of the fruit if you wanted to show that texture more. Beautiful work!!!