Hi Kyra- great job on the cylinders and branch segment! You have nice smooth toning. On the branch segment I would lighten the tone on either side of the highlight. It is too strong a jump in tone from the highlight to the tone flanking it. Quite often the highlight on a branch will not be the same from top to bottom. It follows the shape of the branch and fade in and out in intensity.
Hi Kyra- great job on the cylinders and branch segment! You have nice smooth toning. On the branch segment I would lighten the tone on either side of the highlight. It is too strong a jump in tone from the highlight to the tone flanking it. Quite often the highlight on a branch will not be the same from top to bottom. It follows the shape of the branch and fade in and out in intensity.
Yes. It is hard to get all the tones in such a narrow space. I will practice more!