Hi Kyra- nice job on this onion. The positions of the roots on your drawing look different than on the live subject. Maybe the onion was turned to a different view when you drew it. Your onion has form, but the colors have gotten murky. Doing the base toning in a green or light brown rather than the dark sepia would still let you achieve the form, but keep the lighter gold tones of the onion skin.
Hi Kyra- nice job on this onion. The positions of the roots on your drawing look different than on the live subject. Maybe the onion was turned to a different view when you drew it. Your onion has form, but the colors have gotten murky. Doing the base toning in a green or light brown rather than the dark sepia would still let you achieve the form, but keep the lighter gold tones of the onion skin.