Hi Lisa, Nice page! That orange sphere is lovely! I like your use of color in the cast shadow. On the graphite drawings, be careful of making the reflective light too light. It should almost never be lighter than the highlight. And have a smooth transition to the core shadow. Also, always think of the nature of light on form. where is the subject blocking the light? Your cast shadows are coming up too high and should be darker in those areas near the bottom where the sun doesn’t shine.
Hi Lisa, Nice page! That orange sphere is lovely! I like your use of color in the cast shadow. On the graphite drawings, be careful of making the reflective light too light. It should almost never be lighter than the highlight. And have a smooth transition to the core shadow. Also, always think of the nature of light on form. where is the subject blocking the light? Your cast shadows are coming up too high and should be darker in those areas near the bottom where the sun doesn’t shine.