This drawing has a nice start to it and an interesting composition of multiple objects to work with. Keep building up your shading on your forms so that they have a full value range from light to dark – gives some clear bright highlight areas, and some darker shadowed sides so the forms really start to “round.” The reflective highlight on the second to lowest form reads in a confusing way to me. I like the overall softness of your drawing.
Here’s a link to the brown Kraft Stonehenge paper I referred to: https://drawbotanical.com/product/stonehenge-kraft-paper-pad/
This drawing has a nice start to it and an interesting composition of multiple objects to work with. Keep building up your shading on your forms so that they have a full value range from light to dark – gives some clear bright highlight areas, and some darker shadowed sides so the forms really start to “round.” The reflective highlight on the second to lowest form reads in a confusing way to me. I like the overall softness of your drawing.