Hi Lucie! Your drawing is beautifully rendered and the colors are so rich and fresh!!! Wonderful job!!! I would add a little more dark toning to the left side of all of the apples to emphasize their form. I would look at a couple of areas again. The apple on the left has a white line on the apple skin where it meets the leaf that needs to be darkened. The apple on the bottom does not read that it’s bottom is pointing up toward us. I think the darker toning on the upper left of that apple would help convey that position more.
Beautiful. I love the rich saturated colors and full range of values. Really lovely. You may want to add a little more toning around the edges of your apples (especially on the left sides and bottoms) where the form is turning away from the light to make them appear a little more 3D. Compositionally, I think that bottom middle leaf pulls the eye off the page. Maybe you could add another leaf under it, and have it on a diagonal, to help it from pulling the eye down? Very minor thing but thought it was worth mentioning. It’s wonderful drawing!
Beautiful! ❤️
Hi Lucie! Your drawing is beautifully rendered and the colors are so rich and fresh!!! Wonderful job!!! I would add a little more dark toning to the left side of all of the apples to emphasize their form. I would look at a couple of areas again. The apple on the left has a white line on the apple skin where it meets the leaf that needs to be darkened. The apple on the bottom does not read that it’s bottom is pointing up toward us. I think the darker toning on the upper left of that apple would help convey that position more.
Thank you very much for these nice comments and great advice ! I’ll give it a try and post the updated version 🙂
Beautiful. I love the rich saturated colors and full range of values. Really lovely. You may want to add a little more toning around the edges of your apples (especially on the left sides and bottoms) where the form is turning away from the light to make them appear a little more 3D. Compositionally, I think that bottom middle leaf pulls the eye off the page. Maybe you could add another leaf under it, and have it on a diagonal, to help it from pulling the eye down? Very minor thing but thought it was worth mentioning. It’s wonderful drawing!