Much better form on this version Margaret! Nice range of tones that give the sphere wonderful form. A couple of things to consider- the highlight could still be lighter. The reflected light currently looks whiter than the main highlight. The reflected light should not be as white/light as the main highlight. Also keep working on having the reflected light not be such a controlled line. Fellow artist Sara recently posted some plum drawings and the reflected light she achieved make for a great reference. Have your cast shadow fade out more as it moves away from the tomato and have the top part curve back to round it off more. Nice job!
Much better form on this version Margaret! Nice range of tones that give the sphere wonderful form. A couple of things to consider- the highlight could still be lighter. The reflected light currently looks whiter than the main highlight. The reflected light should not be as white/light as the main highlight. Also keep working on having the reflected light not be such a controlled line. Fellow artist Sara recently posted some plum drawings and the reflected light she achieved make for a great reference. Have your cast shadow fade out more as it moves away from the tomato and have the top part curve back to round it off more. Nice job!
Yes. Sara’s plum drawings show the reflected light so well. I will try again.