Nice one. Fun character study – great colours. It looks like your light source here is coming from the right since the shadows are on the left, so give a good highlight in the upper right quadrant of that onion. You can try softening your shadows – we always say that we don’t want those shadows overpowering the main star of the show – the onion! Nice job following the contours of the onion – it’s so helpful to use those features to help describe the volume of the form.
Nice one. Fun character study – great colours. It looks like your light source here is coming from the right since the shadows are on the left, so give a good highlight in the upper right quadrant of that onion. You can try softening your shadows – we always say that we don’t want those shadows overpowering the main star of the show – the onion! Nice job following the contours of the onion – it’s so helpful to use those features to help describe the volume of the form.