What a great page! I like how you have included all the elements in a pleasing composition. I’d add a bit more darks in the leaves. Especially in those little triangles where the leaves meet. I see it in the shadow of the stem. Just more of that.
01 April 2021
Wow, beautiful petals, Machi! I agree with Katy; a few more darks in the “v”s where the leaves and petals meet will really enhance the 3d quality of this drawing. It’s so lovely!
What a great page! I like how you have included all the elements in a pleasing composition. I’d add a bit more darks in the leaves. Especially in those little triangles where the leaves meet. I see it in the shadow of the stem. Just more of that.
Wow, beautiful petals, Machi! I agree with Katy; a few more darks in the “v”s where the leaves and petals meet will really enhance the 3d quality of this drawing. It’s so lovely!
Beautiful Machi!
So beautiful!