Great page, Mary Jo! You did a great job with the white flower petals, and I love those reproductive parts in the composition. My only suggestion would be to add a little more dark tones in a couple places–Kraft paper often requires a little more boldness in the dark tones to get a full tonal range to be effective on this midtone paper. A few more darks in the overlaps of the petals, as well as on the shadow sides of the stamens and pistil would really make these pop!! 🙂
Great page, Mary Jo! You did a great job with the white flower petals, and I love those reproductive parts in the composition. My only suggestion would be to add a little more dark tones in a couple places–Kraft paper often requires a little more boldness in the dark tones to get a full tonal range to be effective on this midtone paper. A few more darks in the overlaps of the petals, as well as on the shadow sides of the stamens and pistil would really make these pop!! 🙂
I’m a big fan of this page.