Hopefully the writing at the top of this page will improve after taking Vern’s class this month. Need a lot of improvement. Also, for next month’s Art Feed the assignment is to create a focal spot in our drawings. It seems like the lettering has become the focal spot in this one which was not intended. Any feedback would be appreciated. My eye goes to the dancing stamens only because I like them best. Thanks, Mary Jo
Gorgeous Mary Jo!!!! Great composition! The focal point to me is that beautiful flower and I find it hard to take my eyes off it!!!! All aspects of this drawing are wonderfully rendered!!! Personally I don’t think you needed the title at the top. Especially with it having a white background I find it distracting, but that beautiful flower still wins!!!!
Hopefully the writing at the top of this page will improve after taking Vern’s class this month. Need a lot of improvement. Also, for next month’s Art Feed the assignment is to create a focal spot in our drawings. It seems like the lettering has become the focal spot in this one which was not intended. Any feedback would be appreciated. My eye goes to the dancing stamens only because I like them best. Thanks, Mary Jo
Gorgeous Mary Jo!!!! Great composition! The focal point to me is that beautiful flower and I find it hard to take my eyes off it!!!! All aspects of this drawing are wonderfully rendered!!! Personally I don’t think you needed the title at the top. Especially with it having a white background I find it distracting, but that beautiful flower still wins!!!!