Hi Mary Jo- I love the composition and the position of the cast shadows of the stems are really good! I would lighten the cast shadows of the berries and foliage. They are dominating too much. The seeds on the upper strawberry look recessed, which is what I would expect. The seeds on the bottom strawberry look like they are raised on the surface. Is that what you intended?
17 June 2021
I recommend an enlargment exercise for you, Mary Jo–magnify those seed areas a little more so that you can really define what’s happening there. Beautiful stems, leaves, and cast shadows!!
Hi Mary Jo- I love the composition and the position of the cast shadows of the stems are really good! I would lighten the cast shadows of the berries and foliage. They are dominating too much. The seeds on the upper strawberry look recessed, which is what I would expect. The seeds on the bottom strawberry look like they are raised on the surface. Is that what you intended?
I recommend an enlargment exercise for you, Mary Jo–magnify those seed areas a little more so that you can really define what’s happening there. Beautiful stems, leaves, and cast shadows!!