Deepened the color in that front pod to try to bring it forward. Lifted some color from the leaf bc I thought it was becoming too important (it looks terrible right now, but I plan to try to make it better). I’m thinking about attaching something to one of those peduncles (or turn one of them into a leaf or something) to curve down toward that cluster of pods to kind of create a spiral composition. Any thoughts on that (if I’m making any sense)?
It’s so beautiful, Pam. I wonder if you’ve posted again and I’ll get to it as I scroll. I wonder if there could be some touch more darks in the inside of that top curled leaf. Also wonder if it would be permissible for some bit of fluff to be drawn blowing across the page – one got free? Wind borne? All the other elements you wrote about I think you addressed perfectly.
Deepened the color in that front pod to try to bring it forward. Lifted some color from the leaf bc I thought it was becoming too important (it looks terrible right now, but I plan to try to make it better). I’m thinking about attaching something to one of those peduncles (or turn one of them into a leaf or something) to curve down toward that cluster of pods to kind of create a spiral composition. Any thoughts on that (if I’m making any sense)?
Wow. It made a huge difference, there is definitely depth now! Really beautiful.
Thanks, Renata
Love the softness and subtlety here, beautiful!
It’s so beautiful, Pam. I wonder if you’ve posted again and I’ll get to it as I scroll. I wonder if there could be some touch more darks in the inside of that top curled leaf. Also wonder if it would be permissible for some bit of fluff to be drawn blowing across the page – one got free? Wind borne? All the other elements you wrote about I think you addressed perfectly.