Hi Karye! I love the composition and your mix of b/w and color! Everything has wonderful form – especially the whole peach! The subjects in color look like they are sitting on top of the page. Also great job on the reflected light! Bravo!
I LOVE how you incorporated that branch in the back and get it monochrome. It really sets off the other parts of the drawing. Compositionally, I think that I would rather see that whole peach below the branch instead of on top of it. It just seams a little out place kind of resting on that leaf. If there was another branch above it, where you could have it attach to a branch I think that could be interesting.
Thank you for the feedback. I like the idea of attaching the whole peach to another branch. I started this composition in the Peaches workshop last year.
Hi Karye! I love the composition and your mix of b/w and color! Everything has wonderful form – especially the whole peach! The subjects in color look like they are sitting on top of the page. Also great job on the reflected light! Bravo!
I LOVE how you incorporated that branch in the back and get it monochrome. It really sets off the other parts of the drawing. Compositionally, I think that I would rather see that whole peach below the branch instead of on top of it. It just seams a little out place kind of resting on that leaf. If there was another branch above it, where you could have it attach to a branch I think that could be interesting.
Thank you for the feedback. I like the idea of attaching the whole peach to another branch. I started this composition in the Peaches workshop last year.