Any chance you can post a photo of your subject? I think I could give better advice if I saw what this looks like. You are doing a really great job with this. Your highlight is really nice. I wonder whether the highlight would be that perfectly round. I’m wondering whether it would be a little more enlongated. The shadow side is looking really nice. Yellow is hard, and your shadow color is quite nice. You could add just a teeny tiny bit of light shadow to the top left edge to show that that area is turning away from the light. Great job, Patricia!
Any chance you can post a photo of your subject? I think I could give better advice if I saw what this looks like. You are doing a really great job with this. Your highlight is really nice. I wonder whether the highlight would be that perfectly round. I’m wondering whether it would be a little more enlongated. The shadow side is looking really nice. Yellow is hard, and your shadow color is quite nice. You could add just a teeny tiny bit of light shadow to the top left edge to show that that area is turning away from the light. Great job, Patricia!