Welcome to theArtFeed Orawan! I am in the midst of a move I am behind with the reviews. Your toning on the branch segment (with the cut off side branch) is really well done. Very nice toning and range of tones which gives the branch great form. The combination of branches on the right is not as successful because the branches are missing the highlight and range of tones that you did so well on the individual branch. Without creating the form, the branches look flat. It is an easy fix and use your single branch as the reference to what you want to achieve.
Welcome to theArtFeed Orawan! I am in the midst of a move I am behind with the reviews. Your toning on the branch segment (with the cut off side branch) is really well done. Very nice toning and range of tones which gives the branch great form. The combination of branches on the right is not as successful because the branches are missing the highlight and range of tones that you did so well on the individual branch. Without creating the form, the branches look flat. It is an easy fix and use your single branch as the reference to what you want to achieve.