Awesome Rita! I think you can go darker with red violet or whatever works where the petals go behind the sepals for more drama there. Could tone down some secondary veining with some watercolour and make sure I see good highlights on the left leaf. more of a shadow behind the centre leaf on the one behind it for overlap, definitely tone down that secondary vein on the centre behind leaf so it pushes back. I really like this page – it really stands out.
20 August 2020
Agreed; some more dark “v”s in the overlaps of the flower will look really nice.
Awesome Rita! I think you can go darker with red violet or whatever works where the petals go behind the sepals for more drama there. Could tone down some secondary veining with some watercolour and make sure I see good highlights on the left leaf. more of a shadow behind the centre leaf on the one behind it for overlap, definitely tone down that secondary vein on the centre behind leaf so it pushes back. I really like this page – it really stands out.
Agreed; some more dark “v”s in the overlaps of the flower will look really nice.