Hi Rita- your citrus is great! Great color selection and saturation and I like the details! I think you could add more dark toning to areas on the leaves. In the future I would consider moving the leaf lying on top of the fruit to be behind it. It is confusing now and it gives the fruit an odd shape on that side. As it is, that same leaf is one I would darken along the bottom to the end.
14 January 2021
Looking good, RIta! I would consider bringing some more of that beautiful texture into the highlight area? Maybe even put some dots in bright white into that highlight? With really saturated white watercolor or … white gouache?
Hi Rita- your citrus is great! Great color selection and saturation and I like the details! I think you could add more dark toning to areas on the leaves. In the future I would consider moving the leaf lying on top of the fruit to be behind it. It is confusing now and it gives the fruit an odd shape on that side. As it is, that same leaf is one I would darken along the bottom to the end.
Looking good, RIta! I would consider bringing some more of that beautiful texture into the highlight area? Maybe even put some dots in bright white into that highlight? With really saturated white watercolor or … white gouache?
Very pretty!