Hi Rita- the tomatillo on the left is particularly good and you have done a good job capturing the paper like outer covers on all of them! It took me a while to realize that the one on the right is showing us an inside view. I think all the subjects could benefit from more dark toning. You have only done little wisps of cast shadows. I think for this piece committing to cast shadows would help ground the subjects.
Hi Rita- the tomatillo on the left is particularly good and you have done a good job capturing the paper like outer covers on all of them! It took me a while to realize that the one on the right is showing us an inside view. I think all the subjects could benefit from more dark toning. You have only done little wisps of cast shadows. I think for this piece committing to cast shadows would help ground the subjects.