Great composition Rita! I think you need some toning on the white flowers to give the flowers some depth and delineation. For example, the flower on the top right. After looking at it for a while I know that the flower face is suppose to be facing left (with the petals curving in towards the center), but it reads to me that it is facing right (and the petals are curving up and away from the center) and then the location of the tubular part does not make sense.
Great composition Rita! I think you need some toning on the white flowers to give the flowers some depth and delineation. For example, the flower on the top right. After looking at it for a while I know that the flower face is suppose to be facing left (with the petals curving in towards the center), but it reads to me that it is facing right (and the petals are curving up and away from the center) and then the location of the tubular part does not make sense.