Hi Robin- look at your tone bar in the squares again. There should be more of a difference between #4 and 5 and #6 and 7 (starting from the left and going right). The #9 at the end should be as dark as you can get it. Work on doing smooth, even layers. You should not be able to see the pencil marks. On the golden fruit I would move the highlight over a little to the left and lighten the toning around the highlight. You are off to a good start!
Hi Robin- look at your tone bar in the squares again. There should be more of a difference between #4 and 5 and #6 and 7 (starting from the left and going right). The #9 at the end should be as dark as you can get it. Work on doing smooth, even layers. You should not be able to see the pencil marks. On the golden fruit I would move the highlight over a little to the left and lighten the toning around the highlight. You are off to a good start!