Stunners! And hooray to highlights on the banner. Good job! I think your cast shadows are a bit too linear – too much like a dark line – they make the citrus forms flatten or squish down a bit. you can soften them and let them fade out. Nice toning!
29 December 2020
Awesome, Sara! I love the piece of peel in the top right corner. 🙂
These look great! You have chosen some good colors for your lemons. The shadow side on the right one is spot on! I agree with Sam that you can soften the shadows. I would rethink the color, too. It seems a bit cool. I’d add a warm color overtop of what you have and gradually extend it out a bit. I love the little sliver of peel. I can feel the texture and sense that it is drying up. Great job!
I’m trying to figure out citrus. I’m inspired by some of you! They are bright a cheery to draw on a snowy day.
Stunners! And hooray to highlights on the banner. Good job! I think your cast shadows are a bit too linear – too much like a dark line – they make the citrus forms flatten or squish down a bit. you can soften them and let them fade out. Nice toning!
Awesome, Sara! I love the piece of peel in the top right corner. 🙂
These look great! You have chosen some good colors for your lemons. The shadow side on the right one is spot on! I agree with Sam that you can soften the shadows. I would rethink the color, too. It seems a bit cool. I’d add a warm color overtop of what you have and gradually extend it out a bit. I love the little sliver of peel. I can feel the texture and sense that it is drying up. Great job!