Sharon, This is beautiful! So well toned. You’re showing a real sensitive touch. Great job! You could even bring those texture lines more into the highlight area. Just be careful to keep them light and reflect what is happening with the light source.
20 October 2021
Nice job! Let some of your lightest tones break into that highlight area in a couple places so that you’re not left with a straight, white stripe down the side. The highlight can come and go, especially when it interacts with a textured surface like this. You’re doing great work–keep it up!
Sharon, This is beautiful! So well toned. You’re showing a real sensitive touch. Great job! You could even bring those texture lines more into the highlight area. Just be careful to keep them light and reflect what is happening with the light source.
Nice job! Let some of your lightest tones break into that highlight area in a couple places so that you’re not left with a straight, white stripe down the side. The highlight can come and go, especially when it interacts with a textured surface like this. You’re doing great work–keep it up!