Have some questions: where the two leaves cross top left? Little piece of stem on the pomegranate? Add petals, dissections at the bottom? Other things?
Hi Sheila- the leaves that I have trouble with are the cluster of leaves top right. I think they need more toning to clarify each leaf. I think the little stem looks fine. I would add more tone to the fruit itself on the left side especially in the “v” where the leaves meet. The open views and seeds are so cool, but I fear it would be too crowded. Petal detail and/or flower dissection would be good!
Have some questions: where the two leaves cross top left? Little piece of stem on the pomegranate? Add petals, dissections at the bottom? Other things?
Hi Sheila- the leaves that I have trouble with are the cluster of leaves top right. I think they need more toning to clarify each leaf. I think the little stem looks fine. I would add more tone to the fruit itself on the left side especially in the “v” where the leaves meet. The open views and seeds are so cool, but I fear it would be too crowded. Petal detail and/or flower dissection would be good!
Hi Doug, thanks for the suggestions. Just got some fresh leaves today. I’m going back in!